Cold Blue Noon

I'm back in teh Songwriting scene.

I wrote this a week ago, and I got all the guitar riffs down. If ya need me to give you a demo of how it sounds like, ask me .. I'll bring down my guitar and play it for ya so you can comment on it. I need all of yous opinions so I can get it better D:

This is an original by me. And soon by my band - the Famous Living Dead....

Cold Blue Noon - FLD

Getting a sign,
Somewhere over the moon
I just wondered why,
I had to be this way,

Travel along this,
Cold blue noon
I cannot say why,
The fuck am I doing

Never thought that
You were always
What I never saw
And said, so...


[Rain drops
On this grave site
Never thought what
It would be like to kiss

This tainted grove
Of yours you hold
Should have seen coming
From the first fight

Rain drops
On this grave site
Never show you
What I would be like

If the world, Said goodnight,
In this hour
Your memories
They will haunt, our flower]


Bloodshot eyes, they
Inspired the room,
As we wondered,
Why your lust is so hateful

Beautiful, and yet
So painful
The deaths I've caused you
I'm living the limelight


[Rain drops
On this grave site
Never thought what
It would be like to kiss

This tainted grove
Of yours you hold
Should have seen coming
From the

Rain drops
On this grave site
Never show you
What I would be like

If the world, Said goodnight,
In this hour
Your memories
They will haunt, our flower]


Nightmares dillusion
Through my thoughts
It Made me see
Why I had chosed you

Made me think
Again about you
Should have killed it
Should have sealed it

The scars I've laid,
The lies I've said
I just want you
No matter the cause...



[Rain drops
On this grave site
Never thought what
It would be like to kiss

This tainted grove
Of yours you hold
Should have seen coming
From the first fright

Rain drops
On this grave site
Never show you
What I would be like

If the world, Said goodnight,
In this hour
Your memories
They will haunt, our flower]
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I noes, it kinda sucks. I'm trying not to be so Emo, and trying to make it sound "Horror-like" at the same time... I don't even know the fucking meaning behind the song, other than the fact it's about something .. love maybe .. or sex .. or rape .. or ALL OF TEH ABOVE D:

but I'm working on it...!!! D:

The Songs starts off with a classical riff, then followed by hard power chords. It's a punk-rock/alternative rock kind of song.

I'll put teh Tabs on later....